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=> Re: A NATION IN CRISIS - A POEM

Posted by pancho (Guest) - Wednesday, June 27 2007, 21:04:59 (CEST)
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Your poems are too facile
Too jingly sweet
Your depth is most fragile
Your meaning tweet tweet.

Whom are you addressing
What are you guessing?
You too prayed for Bush`s messing
You too wished America`s blessing.

If you`d have rhymed less before
And thought it through some more
Like you still refuse to your core
Perhaps we`d fine you less of a bore.

Poetry is fine
If your thoughts are refined
But as you produce the stuff
A little is more than enough

It isn`t just rhymes
Or keeping the time
It`s a heightened sense
Of uncommon eloquence.

To nitter and natter
In playful patter
May be cute in the nursery
Where all should be suruppy

But here in this forum
We despise such decorum
Give us meat with your bones
Or leave us alones.

pancho

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A NATION IN CRISIS - A POEM W Gabriel Dinkha - Tuesday, June 26 2007, 15:32:59 (CEST)
- Re: A NATION IN CRISIS - A POEM pancho - 06/27 21:04
  - Re: A NATION IN CRISIS - A POEM Matay - 06/28 00:48
    - Re: A NATION IN CRISIS - A POEM pancho - 06/28 19:03
  - Re: A NATION IN CRISIS - A POEM Jeffrey - 06/29 07:22
    - Do You Realize... pancho - 06/30 01:45

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