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Posted by Jeffrey (Guest) - Friday, June 29 2007, 7:22:53 (CEST)
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pancho wrote:
>Your poems are too facile
>Too jingly sweet
>Your depth is most fragile
>Your meaning tweet tweet.
>
>Whom are you addressing
>What are you guessing?
>You too prayed for Bush`s messing
>You too wished America`s blessing.
>
>If you`d have rhymed less before
>And thought it through some more
>Like you still refuse to your core
>Perhaps we`d fine you less of a bore.
>
>Poetry is fine
>If your thoughts are refined
>But as you produce the stuff
>A little is more than enough
>
>It isn`t just rhymes
>Or keeping the time
>It`s a heightened sense
>Of uncommon eloquence.
>
>To nitter and natter
>In playful patter
>May be cute in the nursery
>Where all should be suruppy
>
>But here in this forum
>We despise such decorum
>Give us meat with your bones
>Or leave us alones.
>
>pancho

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A NATION IN CRISIS - A POEM W Gabriel Dinkha - Tuesday, June 26 2007, 15:32:59 (CEST)
- Re: A NATION IN CRISIS - A POEM pancho - 06/27 21:04
  - Re: A NATION IN CRISIS - A POEM Matay - 06/28 00:48
    - Re: A NATION IN CRISIS - A POEM pancho - 06/28 19:03
  - Re: A NATION IN CRISIS - A POEM Jeffrey - 06/29 07:22
    - Do You Realize... pancho - 06/30 01:45

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